雅思写作7分选手都在用的15个雅思写作高级句,快码住!

文摘   2024-10-15 17:03   北京  


雅思写作的评分标准中,专门列有一项关于“语法准确性和多样性”的细则,很多考生就容易在这一部分吃亏,要不就是无法运用丰富的语法结构,要不就是语法的准确没有办法保证,导致总分一直上不了7甚至6.5



举个例子:

学生出国会很危险,因为他们可能会受到文化冲击。


5分考鸭:Students study abroad can be dangerous,since they may suffer from cultural shocks.


乍一看没有什么问题,但在考官眼里,前半句话说的是『学生』这个描述对象很危险,而不是学生会面对危险。高分表达应该是:It can be dangerous for students to study abroad, since they may suffer from cultural shocks.


所以多数情况下大家没有意识到,自己写的句子是缺少了准确性或者多样性的。为了同学们同时突破语法的两个得分障碍,接下来掌柜就为你们梳理一下上考场前一定要掌握的高分句型

1

Countries can enjoy a higher speed of development and a corresponding higher GDP per capita, the wide recognition of which strengthens the nation branding.


这一句属于定语从句,是同学们最爱使用的句型之一,除了句子中的“of which”外,还可以根据需要运用that/when/where/how等。举几个例子:

Ⅰ. Those who are lucky enough to stay in the school also have to undergo the intense pressure to study hard. 
那些有幸留在学校的人们也得承受努力学习的巨大压力。

Ⅱ. Remote education can reduce students’geographical dependence on the classrooms, the transportation to which typically takes up a large proportion of their spare time.
远程教育可以减少学生对教室的地理性依赖,因为交通通常会占用他们很大一部分课余时间。

Ⅲ.Nowadays, more and more people agree that smoking is an unwholesome hobby, which is equivalent to committing suicide.
越来越多的人同意吸烟是一个不健康的爱好,它等同于自杀。

2

Students should study abroad, since this can benefit them. 

学生应该出国留学,因为这对他们有好处。


这个句子大家能看得出来有什么语法结构吗?看出来的给自己鼓鼓掌!它是原因状语从句,出现的频率也很高,相对来说会简单一些,其它常用的状语从句包括

Ⅰ.让步状语从句although/even if/as...

Although a balanced population age distribution is preferred by most countries, it is not always probable.
尽管大多数国家都希望人口年龄分布均衡,但这并不太可能。

Ⅱ. 时间状语从句:when/while/as/until...

When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

Ⅲ. 条件状语从句:if/in case/so long as/given...

If primary language teaching is not standardised, secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains. 
如果小学语言教学不标准化,中学可能会在学习过程中面临各种语言水平的差异,从而导致课堂经验的流失。

Ⅳ. 原因状语从句:as/since/because/now that/for...

Nonetheless, I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh demerits.
尽管如此,我还是赞成太空探险,因为它的好处远远大于坏处。

3

It is true that the stable proportion of the population of all ages has a role of vital importance to play in the development of a robust economy.

的确,稳定的各年龄段人口比例对一个强劲的经济发展具有至关重要的作用。


主语从句通常用来引导客观事实,适用于想表达被所有人广泛认同的普遍性真理的情况,与雅思写作要求的学术性不谋而合,所以同学们也要多多熟悉。

除了句子中提到的“It is true that...”之外,大家还可以用多种表达:

Ⅰ. It’s imperative that the government should be effectively involved in the comprehensive management of both public and private schools.
政府有必要有效地参与到公立和私立学校的管理中来。

Ⅱ. It is undeniable that global warming is related to human activities.
不可否认,全球变暖与人类活动有关。

4

The key problem, in my opinion, is that younger generations are in the face of stiff competition for education resource with peers.

在我看来,关键问题是年轻一代面临着与同龄人争夺教育资源的激烈竞争。


表语从句也是雅思写作中非常常用的另一种从句,可以构成各种句型,比如:

Ⅰ. The great contribution of public school is that poor students have easier access to receive education.
公立学校的巨大贡献是使贫困学生有了更容易获得教育的途径。

Ⅱ. The point is whether this is the best way. 
问题的关键是这是否是最好的方法。

5

More young children gradually growing up and joining in the labor force, countries can therefore enjoy a higher speed of development and a corresponding higher GDP per capita.

越来越多的幼儿逐渐长大并成为劳动力,国家因此可以享受更高的发展速度和相应的更高的人均GDP。


分词作状语是能写出高分句子的有效方式之一,因为它可以把简单的句子结构显得更加高级除了现在分词,过去分词也可以用作状语。掌柜再展示两句:


Ⅰ. Prompted by the great leap of science and technology, work today is more demanding than it used to be.
受到科技进步的促使,现在的工作比过去要求更高。

Ⅱ. The commodities and services advertised by super stars tend to enjoy higher sales than those not advertised.
由明星代言的产品和服务比没有广告的销售量更高。


上考场上建议大家掌握的句型就是以上这些,但该如何吸收消化,让自己也能信手拈来写出7分句子呢?那就要进行大量的改写练习暴露出错误之后,才能在之后的练习中提醒自己不再犯同样的错误。

在雅思写作中,能灵活运用语法更向考官表明了你们对英语的掌控度,所以如果想顺利拿到高分,一定要将这些高分句型与话题搭配使用,落实到实际写作中去哦!这样不管在考场上遇到什么,都能临危不乱,充分发挥自己的优势,用优秀的答卷面对雅思考官

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