Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and并列宾语从句 that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
确定话题范围：健康
确定讨论对象：way to improve public health, increasing the number of sports facilities, other measures
确定是否有程度词：best
确定写作任务：Solution 类题型 how to do something/ how to solve a problem
极端不成立法则：
best
具象思维：
other measures
sports facilities, easy-to-reach local sports centers/stadium etc.
facilities不等equipment
首段版本一：
A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general public，with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.
One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.
Generally, I think that it takes more efforts to address this issue.
首段版本二：
It is easy to notice that the health level of the general public today is declining rapidly.
While some people might think the best way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities, I tend to hold a different opinion.
首段版本三：
见写作班讲义
让步段:
Some people think that the best solution is to...
... ...
But this solution has some obvious limitations because it might be only attractive to those who are already fit and leading a healthy lifestyle, not to those who most need it.
立论:
However, there certainly are better ways of addressing this problem.
Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example, by installing more sports equipment in public places...
A more effective solution should be to impose high tax penalties on 征收税务罚款high-fat food products, tobacco, and alcohol. ...
Healthy lifestyle should be better introduced to the general public to ....
结尾段:
To conclude, focusing on sports facilities is a narrow approach and并列谓语would not have the desired results.
Other important measures should be adopted as well.
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