CICI专栏 | 6分7分的决胜性标准:复杂句!掌握即上分!

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在写作Task2中的评分标准中有一项GRA (grammatical range and accuracy),考察的是学生写英语句子多样性和准确性的能力,即测试考生简单句和复杂句的综合运用能力。



在写作7分档中对语法的要求是:uses a variety of complex structures。



而在写作4分档中对语法的要求是:uses only a very limited range of structures with only rare use of subordinate clauses。



可见想要写作上高分,需要有些炫酷的句子。但是很多中国考生也清楚句式的表达要多样,具体却并不知道怎样才能让自己的句子丰富多样,结果是普遍句式比较单一,写到复杂结构时往往就是堆砌各种从句,似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可写。


事实上在雅思高范文中,复杂句的数量并不多,很多时候都是把简单句进行了一些包装改造。今天我们就来看看什么是复杂句?以及如何在雅思写作中使用复杂句?如果你想在写作中拿到6.5以上的高分,就来学习一下吧!


什么是复杂句?


很多同学都以为复杂句就是句子长、语法复杂、使用的高级词汇的句子,这导致他们考试时总是写出语法错误多,又长且难以理解的句子。这是雅思写作的大忌,在考官眼里就是班门弄斧,还没有弄好的行为。


复杂句分为两类:并列句和从句。如果一个复杂句中的两个子句重要性相同,那就是并列句;重要性不同则是从句。


#什么是并列句?


例如:She runs and he drives a car 。


上句用并列连词and连接“she runs”和“he drives a car”这两个子句,我们无法说这两个子句谁更重要,因为两者所说的内容重要性相等。所以在写作中,如果两个简单句之间没有因果关系,是两个独立的事情,可以用and将两个简单句连成一个复杂句。


我们可以来做一个小练习,先从简单句开始:


Many children play computer games.Others prefer sports.


这是两个简单句,如何把他们转化成一个复合句?


答案:Many children play computer games but others prefer sports.因为这两句话所表达的含义是相反的,所以在两个简单句中间加了一个并列连接词but。


常见的并列连词有for、and、nor、but、or、yet、so,大家可以记成“FANBOYS”,方便记忆。


#什么是从句?


当两个子句的重要性不同时,我们称这个复杂句为从句形式。从句是由两个句子连接起来的,代词、副词、连词,都笼统地称为引导词,所以从句的一般结构是:简单句1 + 引导词 + 简单句2。引导词表格如下:



还是用刚刚那句话做一下练习:


Many children play computer games.Others prefer sports.


想把这两句话连在一起,应该用表格中的哪一个词呢?我们都知道这两个简单句表达的意思相反,所以要找一个表达相反意思的词有:although,even、though,though,whereas,while。


答案1:Although many children play computer games,others prefer sports.


答案2:Many children play computer games whereas others prefer sports.


做做联系吧


复杂句不怕你不会写,最怕你自信满满的写上去却是错误的,这也是很多同学跑来问我为什么用了很多高大上的句式却还是只得了5.5的原因。CICI为大家准备了一些小练习,大家来试一下吧!(不要提前看答案哦)


#选择最适合的连接词


1.In order to/After/Although improve public health,governments and individuals must work together.




2.Gaming can have serious consequences for a child's social skills whereas/even if/provided that their parents monitor their use.


答案:even if


3.Most children will participate in sports until/unless/provided that they are encouraged and supported.


答案:provided that


4.Because/Even though/So that video games are so addictive,parents need to be hyper-vigilant.


答案:Because


5.Schools could ban devices during class time so that/in order to/since screen time could be curbed.


答案:so that


#讲两句话连在一起


1.Gaming technology has advanced rapidly in the last decade.Gaming technology is almost irresistible to young minds.(as)


答案:As gaming technology has advanced rapidly in the last decade,it is almost irresistible to young minds.


2.Competitive sports should be encouranged among children.Competitive sports can improve health,fitness and foster cooperation.(in order to)


答案:Competitive sports should be encouranged among children,in order to  improve health,fitness and foster cooperation.


#易错点练习


1.Many schools have banned devices during class time.Although,this is not always a popular poilicy.


改1:Many schools have banned devices during class time although this is not always a popular poilicy.


改2:Although it is not always a popular poilicy,many schools have banned devices during class time


2.Cases of screen addiction are increasing.Because mobile devices are now so engaging.


改:Cases of screen addiction are increasing because mobile devices are now so engaging.


3.Some parents forbid the use of devices after dark.While,others are more lenient.


改:Some parents forbid the use of devices after dark while others are more lenient.


今日作业


Do computer games have a positive or negative impact on children ?


大家不用写出一整篇大作文哦,在评论区用几个复杂句表明你的观点就可以!

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