原题呈现
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Nancy 对中国传统节日很感兴趣,请你写一封邮件介绍一个中国传统节日并向她发出邀请。
内容包括:
(1)简要说明你的写信意图;
(2)节日基本信息及上次你是如何庆祝的;
(3)邀请她来中国体验这个节日。
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾己经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡。
Dear Nancy,
Yours,
Li Hua
满分作文1
中国传统节日——春节
Dear Nancy,
Knowing that you take great interest in Chinese festivals.I'm writing this letter to introduce a festival——the Spring Festival and invite you to come to China.
The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people, which always falls in January or February. It is regarded as the biggest event. Getting together with family is a vital custom for us. Last year, I went to my grandparents' home with my parents to celebrate it. We all got up early in the morning and wore our new clothes. In the afternoon, we did cleaning and put up the couplets. To my great joy, I got more than ten red packets from the elderly!What an unforgettable experience it was!
In a word, it's a pity if you miss the festival.I'm looking forward to celebrating this festival with you in China this year.
Yours,
Li Hua
注:vital adj. 极重要的;
couplet n. 对联
名师点评
本文句式丰富,用词高级。开篇的现在分词表达新颖且地道,能吸引阅卷老师的眼球。细读第2段仿佛就是在品一顿文化大餐,贴春联、穿新衣、收压岁钱等传统民俗跃然纸上。整篇文章的用词也非常讲究,如 vital,couplets 等给文章添彩不少。
满分作文2
Dear Nancy,
I'm glad to hear that you take a great fancy to Chinese traditional festivals. Here I want to introduce the Lantern Festival to you.
Lantern Festival is one of the biggest festivals in China. It is celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month and marks the end of the Spring Festival. Last year, my family and I celebrated it at my grandma's house. We made tangyuan with rice flour and had it for dinner. After supper, we went to watch the lantern show. I was greatly impressed by the lanterns which were made in the shape of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many other things. While we were enjoying the colorful lanterns, we had fun guessing the lantern riddles.
I strongly suggest that you pay a visit to China to celebrate the wonderful festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture!
Yours,
Li Hua
注:flour n. 面粉;
riddle n.谜语
名师点评
本文行文流畅,逻辑清晰,体现了作者较强的语言功底。用词地道、表达多样,如短语 take a great fanoy, one of thet形容词最高级+可数名词复数,be impressed bysstrongly suggest that.. 等,体现出作者平时善于积累,灵活运用常见英语表达的能力。