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教授：学校花钱，用于给教师涨工资还是加更多的学习材料和设备？
学生Claire：涨工资能让老师坚守岗位，也能吸引人才进入教育行业。
学生Paul：学习设备资源更多能利于学生学习。
Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor's question.
In your response, you should do the following.
- Express and support your opinion.
- Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Doctor Achebe:
Let's consider how schools allocate their funds for various resources, with a focus on the allocation between teacher salaries and other resources such as computers and books. What do you think is the best way for schools to prioritize their spending? Should more funds go towards increasing teacher salaries to attract and retain quality educators, or should they invest more in technology and learning materials like computers and books?
Claire:
I think raising teachers' salaries is crucial because it can encourage people to view teaching as a viable profession rather than pursuing careers in other industries. Additionally, offering competitive wages can attract some of the brightest and most talented individuals to become teachers. When teachers are fairly compensated, it not only motivates them to excel in their roles but also enhances the overall quality of education.
Paul:
Teacher salaries are already quite competitive, and it may be more prudent to allocate resources toward improving student equipment and providing up-to-date materials. Enhancing the learning environment with better technology and modern educational resources can greatly benefit students' education.
该题目重复上个月8月26日写作真题。涨工资和增加学习设施，两个选项很好，如果构思没有思路，可以多尝试以下两种思路：“反方有好处，但是反方也有坏处”或者“反方有好处，但是我方也有该好处”。具体展开例如，题干学生说涨工资能吸引人才，那么涨工资也可能个其他职业缺人才。题干学生说加设备利于学生，但是加工资也能利于学生。
（表达立场）I agree with Paul’s idea that schools should invest more in technology and learning materials because it can help teachers and students to save money. （解释）If the schools can bear the cost（承担费用）, there is no need for teachers and students to purchase technological equipment or reference books. （引入反方）Some people may claim that increasing teachers' salary will motivate teachers to be more conscientious（兢兢业业的） and highly committed to their work, thereby ensuring a better teaching effect. （反驳反方）However, this is not the most common scenario（最常见的情景）. Now that they can earn more by maintaining their current performance, some teachers may fall into the belief that they needn't make any adjustment or improvement. As a result, the overall education quality will not upgrade.（121 words）
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Some adults believe that young people have become excessively dependent on or even addicted to electronic devices and should try to use them less. Do you agree with this point of view? Explain why or why not, using specific examples and details.
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考情解析：
本题是24 年上半年考试中的原题也是23 年的原题，重点讨论年轻人对电子设备的依赖性以及是否应减少使用。题目探讨了现代科技对青少年生活方式的影响。
如果选择同意，我们可以从以下三个角度进行回答：
1. 健康问题：长期使用电子设备可能导致视力下降、久坐带来的健康问题。
2. 社交能力下降：年轻人更多通过虚拟方式交流，面对面的社交机会减少。
3. 学习效率降低：过度依赖电子设备可能分散注意力，影响学业。
如果选择不同意，可以从以下方面着手：
1. 首先科技的好处：电子设备帮助年轻人获取知识、提高效率，并为他们提供了更多的学习和社交机会。
2. 与时俱进，现代生活需求：当今社会电子设备是不可或缺的工具，年轻人学会合理使用比减少使用更重要。
我们可以使用实际例子或个人经历来支撑论点。比如，可以提到自己或身边的朋友因为过度使用电子设备而出现健康或学习问题，或者反例中说明如何有效利用电子设备来提高学习或工作效率。
这道题也是2023年的考试中的原题，大家也可以参考以上的答题思路串题回答：
Some adults believe that young people have become excessively dependent on or even addicted to electronic devices and should try to use them less. Do you agree with this point of view? Explain why or why not. [2024.01.24] [2023.04.29]
Sample answer
I do believe that young people have become overly dependent on electronic devices and should try to limit their usage.
One reason is that excessive screen time(观看时间) can negatively affect their physical health. For instance, many teenagers spend hours on their phones or computers, leading to issues like eye strain (眼睛疲劳), poor posture(表示弯腰驼背之类的不良姿势), and lack of physical activity(缺乏体育锻炼). This sedentary lifestyle(久坐生活方式) can have long-term consequences for their well-being.
Additionally, overuse of devices impacts their social skills(社交技能). Constantly communicating online reduces opportunities for face-to-face interactions(面对面交流), which are crucial for developing strong interpersonal relationships(人际关系). If they rely too much on virtual communication(虚拟沟通), they might struggle with (在…上挣扎，有困难) real-world social situations.
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