高中外研版必修一 Unit 3 Family matters Writing about a family memory 讲述了为母亲生日做饭送惊喜的故事,这和2021年新高考卷读后续写《母亲节的礼物》内容极其相似,情节和语言完全可以相互借鉴。
1.I was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook. As I was looking at it, the lovely memory of that day came back to me.昨天我在整理房间时,在笔记本里发现了一张旧照片。当我看着它的时候,那天的美好记忆又回到了我的脑海里。
2.It was my mother's birthday ten years ago, and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs. I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen. I had never cooked anything before , so I tried to copy how she did it. But somehow they ended up burnt. 十年前,那是我母亲的生日,我决定用自制的炒鸡蛋给她一个惊喜。我起得很早,踮着脚尖来到厨房。我以前从来没有做过饭,所以我试着模仿她的做法。但不知何故,它们最终被烧糊了。
3.I was about to throw away everything when my mother came in. I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened. To my surprise, she tasted them and said they weren’t bad. I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient. In fact, we ended up laughing and ate them all.
我正准备扔掉所有东西,这时我妈妈进来了。我把鸡蛋拿给她看,伤心地解释了事情的经过。令我惊讶的是,她尝了尝,说还不错。我想爱确实是一种神奇的成分。事实上,我们最后笑着把它们全吃了。
(2021• 新高考全国I 卷) 本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【参考例文】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.