九师联盟高三11月联考英语优秀作文鉴赏(二)

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Once there was a young girl named Lily who loved to go camping with her family. Every summer, they would pack up their car with tents, sleeping bags, and all the necessary supplies for a week-long adventure in the great outdoors.

One summer, as they were setting up camp, Lily noticed a small, furry creature running around the campsite. It was a chipmunk(花栗鼠),and Lily was immediately attracted by it. She named the chipmunk Charlie and decided to make it her mission to befriend him.

Over the next few days, Lily carefully left out small pieces of food for Charlie-pieces of bread, apple slices,and even a few nuts. At first, Charlie was cautious, staying at a distance and watching her from the safety of the underbrush. But Lily was patient. Slowly, day by day, Charlie grew more comfortable with her. By the fourth day, he was eating right out of her hand. Lily couldn't believe how special it felt to gain the trust of a wild animal. It was as if she had been accepted into a secret world of nature.

But one evening,as her family sat around the campfire, Lily realized something was wrong. Charlie didn't show up for his usual evening visit. She looked around the campsite and called out his name softly, but there was no sign of the little chipmunk. Worry filled her heart. Had something happened to him? She asked her parents if they had seen him, but they hadn't noticed anything unusual.

Despite her parents' warnings to stay close to the campsite, Lily felt a strong urge to find Charlie.She grabbed a flashlight and, with a deep breath, walked secretly into the dark woods. The moon was just almost unnoticeable in the sky, and the trees cast long shadows around her. The night was alive with the sounds of crickets and rustling(沙沙响)leaves,but all Lily could think about was Charlie. She called out his name,her voice trembling slightly, as she moved deeper into the forest. She looked around for some time but Charlie was nowhere to be found.



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Just when she was about to turn back,Lilyheard a weak voice from the bush. Shining her flashlight in that direction, she spotted a tiny and trembling figure-Charlie! But he wasn't running toward her. He was stuck, his leg caught in a trap that had been carelessly left behind by someone. Tears welled up in Lily's eyes as she quickly, but gently, freed her little friend.She gently put him into her warm hands, holding him close as she hurried back to the campsite.

Lily came back to the campsite with Charlie safe.Her parents were relieved to see Lily and even more amazed to see her cradling Charlie in her arms after looking for her for a while. For the rest of the trip, Charlie became a regular part of their camping routine. Lily and Charlie formed a special bond that Lily would treasure in the future. And Lily knew the memories of their camping trip would stay with her forever.


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