叙事性的记叙文 (Narration):
叙事性的记叙文的主要内容的概括主要抓住记叙文的几个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件和影响或后果。 记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
写作注意事项
记叙文它包括“六大要素”：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果 (即when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白，同时还应注意以下三点。 1. 叙述方式：主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。 2. 时态上：记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情，所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。 3. 人称上：常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情。用第三人称是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。
写作方法
第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等；
第二段：详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等；
第三段：评价该事件：表明自己的看法、感受等。
写好文章开头的四种方式
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开门见山式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到开门见山，既要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如：“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)” 的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 02
回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如：never forget (永远无法忘记)、remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、exciting (令人激动的)、surprising (令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)…… 如：“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)”
的开头还可以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.03
疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如：“Planting Trees (种树)” 的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如：“Traveling Abroad (出国之旅)” 的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore? 04
倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如：“Catching Thieves (捉贼)” 的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
典例赏析
（2022·新疆中考真题） 初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。 例如： 1. 一次难忘的旅行 2. 一次难忘的比赛 3. 一次难忘的志愿服务 …… 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名： 3. 词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。 【答案】例文 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【详解】 1. 题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。 2. 写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2022天津中考真题） 假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。 2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。 3）树干太沉，她搬不动。 4）人们过来帮忙。 5）你认为…… 参考词汇：被吹倒 be blown down 挡住 block 树枝 branch 树干 trunk 要求： 1）词数：80～100个。 2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 【答案】例文 Dear David, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 1. 题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。 2. 写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
模拟题型
（2022·辽宁辽阳模拟预测） 良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下内容要点提示，以 “Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic” 为题，写一篇短文，可以适当发挥。 1）每天早晨6:30按时起床，运动半小时，晚饭后运动一小时左右； 2）骑自行车或步行上下学； 3）主动上体育课，积极参加课外活动； 4）身体强健，精力充沛，保持运动习惯。 要求： 1. 开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全，句子及篇章结构正确连贯，书写规范； 3. 不得出现姓名校名等个人信息。 【答案】例文 Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.
In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in PE. Sometimes we play football or volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in some after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or with my friends.
I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.
【详解】 1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。第二段应包含内容要点提示中的前3点，都是关于“我”平时具体的运动习惯；第三段综述运动的优点，并得出结论我们应该保持运动习惯，呼应文章主题。 2. 写作指导：根据文章的标题可知，本文应该用第一人称来写作；根据内容要点提示可知，时态采用一般现在时为主。
（2022·广东广州模拟预测） 中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办岭南文化节 (Lingnan Cultural Festival) 活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生； 2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）； 3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。 作文要求： 1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。 【答案】例文 It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China. Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. All teachers and students will take part in the activity, and some social groups will be invited to perform folk customs.
There are two major programs to hold this cultural festival: “music appreciation” and “Cantonese opera appreciation”. It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. We should pay attention to safety when participating in activities.
You can watch and experience this activity through 5G network.
【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，需写为书信格式； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要包含提示要点写清楚举办信息，在介绍活动时注意围绕文化主题自己展开描写，写作时注意不需抄写开头和结尾内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点和参加人员； 第二步，具体描写文化节上的活动和注意事项； 第三步，邀请Mike通过网络观看。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参加 ② participate in 参加 ③ pay attention to 注意 [高分句型] ① Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. (定语从句) ② It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. (主语从句+时间状语从句)
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