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People today can shop, work, and communicate with others via the Internet instead of face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?


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本题是难度系数较低的科技类议论文,讨论人们通过互联网购物、工作和与他人交流产生的的影响。



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The rise of the Internet has revolutionized the way people shop, work, and communicate, enabling remote activities that were once confined to physical spaces. Whether this shift is a positive or negative development is a matter of perspective. I believe that the benefits of this transition largely outweigh the drawbacks.

One of the most significant advantages of online shopping is convenience. Consumers can now browse and purchase products from the comfort of their homes, often at any time of day. This has expanded access to goods, reduced the need for travel, and streamlined the purchasing process. Additionally, e-commerce platforms often offer competitive prices and a wider selection, which can be advantageous for both consumers and businesses.

In terms of work, the Internet has transformed the professional landscape, allowing many individuals to work remotely. This flexibility offers better work-life balance, reduces commute time, and opens up job opportunities for people in remote or underserved areas. Moreover, the Internet has fostered collaboration across borders, with tools like video conferencing, cloud storage, and project management software facilitating global teamwork.

Communication has also evolved with the advent of the Internet. Social media, messaging apps, and video calls enable people to stay connected regardless of geographical distances. This has strengthened personal relationships, supported professional networking, and provided platforms for sharing ideas and fostering communities.

However, the shift towards online interactions has some downsides. The lack of face-to-face communication can lead to misunderstandings and a sense of isolation. Furthermore, the over-reliance on digital tools can result in a loss of personal connection and reduce opportunities for real-world socialization.

In conclusion, while the Internet’s role in shopping, work, and communication presents certain challenges, it offers enhanced convenience, accessibility, and global connectivity, making it a largely positive development in modern society.
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重点词汇/语料

revolutionize the way people shop, work, and communicat
彻底改变人们购物、工作和交流的方式

enable remote activities that were once confined to physical spaces 
启用曾经局限于物理空间的远程活动

a matter of perspective 
角度的问题

transition 
转变

browse and purchase products from the comfort of their homes 
在舒适的家中浏览和购买产品

expand access to goods 
扩大商品获取渠道

streamline the purchasing process 
简化采购流程

e-commerce platforms 
电子商务平台

competitive prices and a wider selection 
有竞争力的价格和更广泛的选择

advantageous for both consumers and businesses 
对消费者和企业都有利

has transformed the professional landscape 
已经改变了职业形势

work remotely 
远程工作

better work-life balance 
更好地平衡工作与生活

reduce commute time 
减少通勤时间

open up job opportunities for people in remote or underserved areas 
为偏远地区或服务不足地区的人们提供就业机会

foster collaboration across borders 
促进跨境合作

video conferencing, cloud storage, and project management software 
视频会议、云存储、项目管理软件

facilitate global teamwork 
促进全球团队合作

evolve with the advent of the Internet 
随着互联网的出现而发展

stay connected regardless of geographical distances 
无论地理距离如何,都要保持联系

strengthen personal relationships 
加强人际关系

support professional networking 
支持专业网络

provide platforms for sharing ideas and fostering communities 
提供分享想法和培育社区的平台

shift towards online interactions 
转向在线互动

a sense of isolation 
孤立感

over-reliance on digital tools 
过度依赖数字工具

a loss of personal connection and reduce opportunities for real-world socialization 
失去个人联系,减少现实世界社交的机会

present certain challenges 
提出一些挑战

enhanced convenience, accessibility, and global connectivity 
增强了便利性、可及性和全球互联互通

a largely positive development in modern society 
现代社会的积极发展



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