读外刊学地道写作

美体   教育   2024-04-12 14:06   北京  
大家好,我是燃燃。本专栏中,学习外刊最新报道中的地道表达+句式


shine a spotlight on.



A number of high-profile incidents have shined a spotlight on minor misbehavior in China’s countryside. 一些备受瞩目的事件让人们关注到中国农村小的不当行为。


spotlight表示聚光灯。shine类似于cast, throw, put这种投射光线的动作,把灯光打到一个地方,大家的注意力会聚集于此。故shine a spotlight on表示「让人注意到,凸显出…问题」

shine的过去式和过去分词有两种形式,shinedshone,注意辨识。


该表达类似于attract one’s attention。也可以与emphasize, highlight替换使用。

比如Developed countries’ experience with COVID-19 has shone a spotlight on one of the great failings, the lack of health equity.发达国家在新冠疫情方面的经历让人们注意到一大缺陷,即缺乏健康公平。


the spotlight表示媒体和公众的注意。in the spotlight在聚光灯下,「受到关注」sth put/turn the spotlight on sth某物使人们的目光关注到…问题上。

比如Unemployment is once again in the spotlight.失业问题再次受到人们的关注。


■结合校园霸凌话题造句,

最近关于校园霸凌的新闻使人们再次关注到青少年教育问题。

Recent news about campus bullying has once again turned the spotlight on adolescent education.(其中turned the spotlight on也可用shined a spotlight on)

若用in the spotlight则可改写为,
Adolescent education is once again in the spotlight due to recent news about campus bullying. 由于最近有关校园欺凌的新闻,青少年教育再次成为人们关注的焦点。


due to A, combined with B...


Due to a mix of underdeveloped social and economic conditions in rural areas, combined with inadequate supervision and support from adults, scholars have found left-behind kids fare worse than those who live with both parents, from school performance to physical development and mental health.由于农村地区的社会和经济条件不发达,再加上成年人的监督和支持不足,学者们发现,从学习成绩到身体发育和心理健康,留守儿童的表现都比那些和父母一起生活的孩子要差。

due to A, combine with B…,这部分可以置于句首作为造成原因的分析,combine with相当于and,表示「并列,加之…」并非and和combine with就可以随意替换使用,combine with更有一层加之更锦上添花或火上浇油的递进的感觉,更强调A和B的结合,产生新的结果。


比如Perseverance combined with energy is necessary to success in life. 毅力加上精力是人生成功的要素。


句中A为a mix of underdeveloped social and economic conditions in rural areas,B为inadequate supervision and support from adults. a mix of表示「一种综合」social和economic conditions共同综合到一起作为原因A


■结合科技发展及生活方式造成技能退化练习,

由于先进技术的大量涌现,加之高压和不健康的生活方式,极大削弱了人们的学习能力和生存技能。

Due to the proliferation of advanced technologies combined with high-pressure and unhealthy lifestyles, people’s learning abilities and survival skills have been greatly eroded. 



a spectrum of


But it’s also important to implement a spectrum of protective programs, from raising awareness of bullying to rapid intervention.但实施一系列保护项目也很重要,包括提高对欺凌行为的认识和快速干预。

spectrum可以表示「光谱」,光谱有不同波段是一个变化的范围,故还可以表示「范围」;系列。a (broad) spectrum of (广泛)的范围,比如a broad spectrum of interests广泛的兴趣范围。


提出措施句式:

It is imperative/important to implement a spectrum of (protective) measures/programs, (ranging) from A to B. 实施诸如A和B等的一系列(保护)措施/项目非常迫切/重要


结合校园霸凌话题利用上述句式试写,

最近关于校园霸凌的新闻使人们再次关注到青少年教育问题。当务之急是实施一系列保护措施,包括提高对欺凌的认识及教育工作者和家长的联合干预。

Recent news about campus bullying has once again turned the spotlight on adolescent education. It is imperative to implement a spectrum of protective measures, ranging from raising awareness of bullying to joint intervention from educators and parents.



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